Please read and critique my prose writing!?

"such red" is slightly redundant with "such a painful..." This can be mended by saying something like "that hue of red" That's the only thing I can really find wrong. It is very descriptive, and the adjectives were chosen nicely because they really seem to help paint a picture around your story; they're very strong, almost overpowering. I find it interesting how this story describes you.